Friday, December 2, 2011

Thesis

Hey guys! Think I could get some feedback on my thesis for the paper? And just for reference, my bibliography can be found here and was on the art of book binding..

Thesis: "Although many people think that binding books only had an effect on the general cost and long term preservations of books, few know that the strengthening of the Bible and church was aided by book binding since Bibles were more portable and light weight, could be searched through more effectively, and were more economical."
Posted by Madison Grant at 2:32 PM
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  1. Alicia StantonDecember 2, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    You're currently making the argument that many people know one thing and only a few know the other. You may want to reword to actually make the argument that binding strengthened the Bible and church. Although many people think..., book binding actually helped strengthen the Bible and the church because...

    Also, "many people" is pretty ambiguous, so if you could be more specific that would probably be good. :) Good luck!!

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  2. Madison GrantDecember 2, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    Thank you so much! This helps a lot!

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