A Paper on Censorship (part 2)

As the due date looms nearer I have posted my very first rough draft of my paper on a Google doc here. I have also ventured to post some of my notes from the reading/research I have done with this paper here.

How to Help:

1. Look for errors! (I am not the worlds best speller!)
2. Find ways to expand/clarify my arguments.
3. Find ways to expand/clarify the opposition.
4. Think of how I can include a learning outcome.
5. Add general comments either here or on the docs on how I can improve.

Thanks People of the Internet!